Proofreading/Editing Marks I have a better version of this in docs Mrs. P's English Records AWK-- awk ward wording CM-- C om M entary CD-- C oncrete D etail TS--- T opic S entence Thesis Intro WW- W rong W ord, get your thesaurus PRONTO ! Thesaurus.com Background Paragraph needed Conc-- Conclusion Global lessons-- where could these ideas go in the future? Slang-- your wording is too casual-- this includes I's, "you's, "a lot", very, greatly, etc. DS-- double-space Hanging Indent F-- Fragment Fragments are incomplete sentences. Usually, fragments are pieces of sentences that have become disconnected from the main clause. One of the easiest ways to correct them is to remove the period between the fragment and the main clause. A clause is a statement or a question that generally consists of a subject and a verb phrase and constitutes a complete...
STUDENTS OF MRS. P'S ENGLISH 4 CLASSES: You are receiving this email because your annot bib is not progressing a quickly as it needs to. I understand that you may have been sick or otherwise; still, I want to check in with you for a 1/2-hour to get you up to speed. Please report to H-22 @ Friday lunch 12:50 pm so I can give you some one-to-one tutoring time on this assignment. Bring a fully-charged laptop. You may bring lunch, drinks, and music. I will keep you all lunchtime. As you know , if you don't show up to detention, you'll have to stay after school with a phone call home. If that doesn't work, I will assign Friday school. Mrs. P
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