Proofreading/Editing Marks     I have a better version of this in docs  Mrs. P's English Records   AWK--  awk ward wording  CM-- C om M entary  CD--  C oncrete  D etail  TS---  T opic  S entence  Thesis  Intro  WW-  W rong  W ord, get your thesaurus  PRONTO !   Thesaurus.com  Background Paragraph needed  Conc-- Conclusion  Global lessons-- where could these ideas go in the future?  Slang-- your wording is too casual-- this includes I's, "you's, "a lot", very, greatly, etc.  DS-- double-space  Hanging Indent   F-- Fragment   Fragments  are incomplete sentences. Usually,  fragments  are pieces of sentences that have become disconnected from the main clause. One of the easiest ways to correct them is to remove the period between the  fragment  and the main clause.    A clause is a statement or a question that generally consists of a subject and a verb phrase and constitutes a complete...